I liked your sense of humor when you told the reader that Andrew tried to climb the wall like Spider-Man. I liked your intro and word choices. I liked when you wrote, "That coward" .
You scared my hair away. It was really spooky.
I liked your ending. I also liked how spooky your story was.
P.S. IT WAS AWESOME!!!!!!
Great job Amit i like your story.
I like the way you put lots of crazy creatures that made me get goosebumps!
I liked your story.
Amit I don't think I can sleep now , it was so scary.
I like the story in part 1 and 2 with spider-man and the spider wed