I liked where you said you grabbed baking soda!
I love the way you have a neat picture. Your story was awesome when you say i turn face to face that you know what was at the back of you. When you say i became a hero i wish you are.
I liked the story and I like your story.
I love when you said we are a heros
I like the wind in your story.
I got suprised when Mr.J's brother was wanted in 7 states.Elma your story is amazingg.
Elma you have a great story
Your picture is awsome. Your story is going to give me nightmar's.
I like the story and the picture because the flashlight and the ghost