Love your picture,intro,and conclusion!!
You explained your details so great.
I love your story and picture. I also love when you used great words that made me feel great.
Great job Natilie!LOVE it!
Thank you natalie for explaining your story that make me read all the time.
You must be so proud of yourself because this story is magnificent ultra super duper amazing.I think you should be very proud to have that kind of talent ! I wish I do.