P.S- Teach me the techniques to soccer!
Thank you Mahmoud ,and I will show you the techniques. :-)
Show me too!!!!
Thank you Amit. :)
I like the action you did it made me jump down and up you made me shout GOAL!!!!!
Yes i agree with you yandry ,he made me shout out too.
I like how you saved the exiting parts for last. :)
I like how you started in the middle of action.
Your story is in first place.
I love your dialogue. you created a moodI think you should get a 4!!!!!
I like the way the reader can picture whats going on in the story. I felt like I was in the story cheering your team on.
I like how explianed your idaes
I really loved it! The conclusion made me jump up and down. Write more exicting stories like this ! By the way your action was great! Wow!
I love your action in the story and I would give you a 4!
P.S. I love soccer !
I agree with all of you you're great Amit .;)
I love your story ,Amit ;0.
I liked your intro and how you explaied your action. :)
Thank guys and yes I will make more entertaining stories. :-)
I loved how you put a picture in my mind when you wrote you did the scissor kick
p.s. I can't do a back flip. :(
Don't feel bad I can't do a backflip either. :3
I remeber that game.You put a picture in my mind even though I was there.
P.S-Amit it wasn't Eddie it was Edger
I liked the conclusion the nervous feeling was replaced with proudness and joy .That really let me go.
I love the way he described the action and the story. :)
We need more comments for this fabulous story! XD
Nice job Amit for the great story!You should earn a 4+
You keep making me reread it. I love your story it was magnificent.
P.S You deserve a 5++!
I love your story,Amit!! I liked the word choice you used when you wrote ,"I was so nervous I felt my stomach turning into a washing machine."
P.S. You can do a backflip mixed with a kick?Wow!!
I agree with Katherine you used great word choice.
You keep making me read this story. :D
Cool story I like your conclusion and your word choice.
I loved how you used diolog.
I like how you wrote about soccer,it is a great way to exsersise.
Your story gets me really tensed up!
Wow Amit i think i should give u a 4 really Amit.
Amit your story was the best story I read.
P.S. keep writing great stories!!!!!!!!!
i like the action
cool story.I really like this story you wrote
I like soccer it is so fun
I give this a 10+
I gave this 100+ And A+
I love soccer too.
I love it
i like that story .
i loved how you added detail and your story was amazing to read!!!
I like how you became and did a scissor
I like your story about telling your soccer story i really like it 100 A+ for you
Can you make more soccer story and i like soccer
I think you will be a good playing
I hope you had a good game. I think you were confident!
If you are in Barcelona, then you will be good!
real madrid more suuuu
teach me how to scissor kick its hard!!!!!!
that was a good game!! i really; like soccer i hope you have another really good. Game i bet you you where the star player that was a good story i play soccer and football i well keep reading your story
your so good at soccer but if your in realmadreed your better