I love it so munch,!!! I like that you did not use dead words you did a bright work 🌞🌞🌞🌞🌞🌞🌞 oh my eyes hurt from the brightness
Thanks Mirela, I bet your story's are just as great.
You are welcome you are the most good person in the world
Your paper really hooked me!!!
Thanks Sammie, thank you for all of the comments you have gave me.
awsome topic and epic wording
so cool it isgrat
I love your paper so much your Tia will love this paper.
I love how your tia is so caring for u and hopfuly she will read this paper and tear up cause u both care about each other with yall life!
i love your paper!!!!!!! U didnt use dead words .your paper is amazing$$$$$$$$your tie will love this paper
the best paper published in history!!!!!OK,i'm joking but i like the paper,great wording,no dead words...those dead words!AHHHHHHHH they turned into zombies!!!!!
Your intro scored a 5!!!!!
Also, your stoory scored a 5!!!!!
I like how you used BIG meaningful words to describe your tia! I totaly think that this scored a 5!!!!!!! :D
you really hooked me & i love your paper LOOOOOOOOOOOOOOL
i love your paper
kennedy your story is awesome you are a great story writer.i love your story
LOVE IT. Your Tia will love it.
i love how you said she was your super girl and how she tried the gymnastics i would want to see that
great jog on your story hope you post another soon.
I love your paper👍👍
I totally LOVE your paper! It's awesome . I really love that you put there is no word to describe how I love her. Fabulous!
i love your paper IWAS SO HOKED!!!
I LOVE THIS PAPER!
I like how u used u dont use dead words i was excited that win i was going to read it it is awesome
Share more amazing paper
Thank u for being the second one to put something on the website
I love how you said how many cookies you sold. I liked when you said
"She would make you laugh so hard you would cry".
...i really don't know what to say cuz it was scored a 999999999999
(i really do i just dont wanna say it cuz i like it
I loved how you followed all of the writing rules and how you...
HAD THE BEST PAPER IN THE WORLD!!!!!!!!JK.Just kidding.
keep going you can do it kende
I love your topic and love that you did not use dead words 😍😍😍❤️❤️💕💕👍👍👍😇😇😻😻🙋🏼😎😎😎🇲🇾🇲🇾I love it
Love It :)
I love this paper so much I had to leave a reply again.
Hi. I don't know exactly if this is Mr Adams class from Bruce Shulkey, but if so, and even if not, I liked the paper. Neat handwriting (unlike me), and very few mistakes. I hope you keep up the good work!
Yes it is
I like when you said NO NO NO.
I like that part to!!!:D
you are luky to have support.
awesome job and I love it
best story yay!!!:)
that story rock
good paper its very good
good paper good JOB?
that was really awesome!!
I loved it!
Love it when I really started reading it I did not want to stop reading the story
Loved it Lucky to have that kind of support
Kennedy (sorry if I spelled your name wrong) I love this paper because you sticked to the topic (your Tia) and, I love the central idea. You organized your paper and you didn’t use any dead words. The paper had a great flow and, It had amazing word choice and, I think you are a wonderful author.
your story was special and u have great writing skills all around
Your Tia is an awesome person I hope that other people appreaciate their Tia's too!
P.S That was the best Tia story EVER!!!
i bet she is the best aunt in the world
I love your story if I could rate it to 1 to 100 for me it would be A 100
That was a speapil I love you