Welcome to 2017 - Lilli's Favorite Time of Year

2/26/2017

Thank you Lilli for sharing your great paper about your favorite time of the year! Please read her paper and tell her what you thought was great by leaving her a comment below.

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71 Comments

Angi

2/27/2017 08:46:00 am

Wow Lilli! Your word choice is amazing from your introduction all the way to your conclusion. I loved your organization too!

Lilli

2/28/2017 01:49:18 pm

Thanks Angi.

Jordan

2/27/2017 08:48:14 am

I like how you used great word choice and included the pool. Awesome paper and PERFECT TOPIC!

Lilli

2/28/2017 01:50:45 pm

Thanks for commenting.

Wyatt

2/27/2017 10:58:02 am

Your intro hooked me! I liked hearing about the game room. That was cool because you don't really see those. Your word choice really gives me an idea in my head.

miguel g

3/2/2017 09:21:24 am

I agree

Zyla

2/27/2017 10:58:53 am

I like how you described the game Flash because I had no idea what it was.

Jakob

2/27/2017 11:00:48 am

I love the details! Your word choice was great! The intro was perfect and it totally hooked me.

travis

2/27/2017 11:58:24 am

i love that you did february because that what i picket. i loved your word chouse

Paul

2/27/2017 12:14:30 pm

I love how you used large descriptive words and mentioned playing pool. I like pool too. I also liked that you mentioned what Flash was. It sounds fun!!

Trinity B

2/27/2017 12:16:38 pm

I like how you had fun. I also like that you chose the month with your birthday. It was so amazing!

Emily

2/27/2017 01:03:40 pm

I like how you used examples for your relaxing time. I also like that you told us what the game Flash was because I didn't really know. It was amazing!

Jaxson

2/27/2017 02:12:29 pm

I wish I could come to your birthday! The intro was awesome. I loved how you follow all the writer's rules. Drop the mic! (boom)

lilli

4/18/2017 02:47:59 pm

BOOM! Drop the mic!

Jadyn W

2/27/2017 02:17:12 pm

I thought your word choice was wonderful Lilli!. I wish I could go to your birthday too :-)

Noah

2/27/2017 02:18:18 pm

I loved your stink through the whole paper. PE-EW!! I liked how your conclusion made me say, "Awww!" And your punctuation was flawless!

Lilli

2/28/2017 01:55:28 pm

Thanks

Giselle

3/1/2017 03:34:56 pm

That was very nice of you to say and thanks for making me laugh if it you who did

Dilan

2/27/2017 02:28:00 pm

Lilli, your paper is really awesome! It is the best paper ever!

Kiara

2/27/2017 03:21:39 pm

I love your paper Lilly and February is my favorite month to 😊😆😀😁😄😃😜😋my love for this paper:-)

Sarah

2/27/2017 03:48:13 pm

I love your word choice and your topic.IT IS AMAZING!

Giselle

2/27/2017 03:55:37 pm

It's great! I like how you used relaxing, snuggling, and other great words. I also like how you celebrate your birthday. It sounds really cool! It has a lot of details in it, and I like your really fabulous writing!

sophie

2/27/2017 05:53:53 pm

I loved your word choice.Delightful,jiffy,exellent and so on and so on.I wish I could come to your next birthday!It was so EPIC!!!

Sarah

2/27/2017 06:15:43 pm

I like how you organized your paragraphs 😍😜❤️👍🏻😇💕❤️😋😻💕💕💕❤️❤️😍😍

Lilli

2/28/2017 03:05:51 pm

Thanks, like the emojis!

Colin

2/27/2017 06:56:00 pm

I like how your paper is very detailed and that there is no dead words in the paper.Great job!

Blake

2/27/2017 06:56:33 pm

I like your amazing words

Colin

2/27/2017 06:58:21 pm

It is awesome!!👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏

Emily

2/27/2017 07:13:30 pm

It's awesome and I hope you can do more!

Sammie

2/27/2017 07:14:22 pm

Your paper really hooked me i think your paper is better than mine☺️☺️☺️Your paper is so awesome!!!!!

Cohen

2/27/2017 07:20:58 pm

Love this paper lilli especially your word choice

Sammie

2/27/2017 07:54:18 pm

Your paper was cool because you used a lot of details. I liked the part where you talked about Flash because I did not know what it was.your paper was awesome!!!!!!!

Jacob

2/27/2017 07:59:49 pm

Great paper lilli I loved the flow that the paper had. you deserve a mic to drop!

Lilli

2/28/2017 01:54:21 pm

Thanks Jacob, by the way I already have a mic.

Natalie

11/4/2017 09:31:09 am

I agree, it makes me feel relaxed too

Daniela

2/27/2017 09:11:04 pm

I absolutely love your paper! It makes me feel relaxed. I like the questions you put in your introduction , it really hooked me! Your paper is epic!

Lilli

2/28/2017 01:52:47 pm

Thanks Daniela, can't wait till I can read yours.

Natalie

11/4/2017 09:28:21 am

I agree its makes me relax

Derika

2/28/2017 10:33:56 am

i love your intro and examples lilli your words flowed with every sentens

christian A

2/28/2017 10:35:07 am

Lilli, i SOOO loved your paper it was like soo cooooooooooool /:

abbygail.e.

2/28/2017 12:09:59 pm

I liked how you followed all the writting rules.Your paper was awsome!

Deshaun

2/28/2017 12:11:25 pm

I like your word choice. Nice Job!!!!

niyaliza

2/28/2017 12:12:31 pm

I like that you have a smart brain and i like how you flow the 6 stips
and i love you'r story

matthew

2/28/2017 12:16:37 pm

i like your story and that you just flowed through the six steps to the writing process! Keep up the very god work! I hope the work paid off and that everyone is enjoying your FTOY paper of should i say,favorite time of year paper!!!! :D :D :D :D :D :D

matthew

2/28/2017 01:03:39 pm

best paper!!!!!! I LOVE IT!!!! KEEP IT UP! :D :D :D :D :D :D :D (faces of forth graders)

ameia

2/28/2017 01:53:08 pm

lilli you did a awasome good job and i am proud of you you is alamost the smartest person in the class

Gage

2/28/2017 02:43:58 pm

hey lili nice paper you for sure put a lot of effort into this paper good job i wish i could come to your party!!

Sarah

2/28/2017 03:28:58 pm

I like how you tell more about your story and what you do in your birthday. I Love It!😍😍😍❤️❤️❤️🙋🏼😻😻💕💕💕nice job

Jadyn

2/28/2017 04:46:17 pm

Yay, Lilli!!!

Sarah

3/1/2017 04:03:55 pm

I like your story because you hooked me to your story.😍😍😍😍😜😜😜😎😎😎😇😇😇💁🏼❤️❤️❤️💕💕💕✌🏻you should be a writing teacher like Mr.Adams.

Unknown aka(Sammie)

3/1/2017 09:32:07 pm

I like your paper!!!Keep it up!!!!!!!

Kierra

3/1/2017 10:01:30 pm

Wow Lily!I loved your word choice and i loved your intro to!I like to see how u and your family and friends are bonding together!

miguel

3/2/2017 09:18:07 am

the intro hooked me

matthew

3/2/2017 01:20:12 pm

:D :D :D :D :D I LOVE IT I WANNA READ IT 999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999 TIMES!!!!

daisy

3/2/2017 01:24:08 pm

i love your story. Its just so beautiful! D.D.D.D.D.D.D.D.D.D..D.D.D.D.D.D.D.D..D.D.D.D.D.D.D.D.D..

blake

3/2/2017 06:25:52 pm

amasing

Jesse

3/3/2017 08:50:32 pm

I like how u describe what was the game flash u hooked me i had no idea what it was it was pe-ew it was amazing i hop u share more

Jesse

3/3/2017 09:03:05 pm

Thank u for being the first one to put something on the website

Natalie

11/4/2017 09:34:53 am

I like..... wait we barid that word. I love the story! :)

mckenzie

11/9/2017 11:41:03 am

i loved your story so much.

paul b.

11/9/2017 02:33:47 pm

One word, MAGIC!

kya

11/10/2017 10:34:38 am

this. Is. the. Best 😻😻😻😻😻😻😻😻😻😻

destiny

11/10/2017 10:41:28 am

your cool

hayden o.

11/14/2017 08:32:35 am

love the paraghraphs

hayden o.

11/14/2017 08:37:51 am

like all the adjitives

jude

1/18/2018 09:05:12 am

I liked the birthday

vivian

9/12/2018 09:19:20 am

it was aok it was gooooooooooooooood...........

nicolas

9/12/2018 11:01:22 am

i like this story

kyndall

9/12/2018 12:18:09 pm

you have a great story i like it a lot i hope you have fun at your next birthday

nganji

9/12/2018 02:13:51 pm

i love the story

nganji

9/12/2018 02:16:24 pm

it is cool XD XD XD

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