Your story was awsome.
i liked the way you started the your story began keep rocking with stories man you have real talent.
Thank you budy.
Your story was great.I love when Mr.Jenkins grabed your soal
I loved how you put in '' LEAVE OR I WILL USE YOU AS AN EXPERIMENT.''
Hey, Caleb! I loved your story. I actually liked the part when Mr. Jenkins took your soul and you never returned to the real world again. That was my favorite part. Oh keep up the good work. I liked the part where Andrew got tied up and you where rushing to untie him. Hope you can keep writing stories the same and awesome ,too!
Thank you girl!!!!!!!!
Cool ! I felt like I was in the story