Your story was creative.
Emanuel your story is better than getting 3 BILLION DOLLARS!!!!!
Are you sure about that.It should be 100,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000
I love my story !!
Hey. I love your story, too!
Hey. I really love the part where Derek is haunted forever until he was 99 yrs old. Then Mr.Jenkins, your little brother, and you drove 2 get some nice delicious pizza!
Your story is awesome.I think your story should deserve to be made into a book.YOUR ARE AWESOME!!!!!!!
I agree with caleb
YOUR STORY IS funny and realy creative