That was a awsome story and I realy like the end.
Thanks man i really liked what you said about my story
Your story was amazing.
i know right
i like how you used those ajectives
your story rocked
I really liked the begining of your story.
i love love love love love it keep writing YOU ARE AWSOME!!!!
Your story was awesome!!!!! I think it needs to be put on billborads and it should be sent to a famous auther that will make it into a whole book!!!
Nice story! Your story was so awesome KK that I could barely pick out my favorite parts! :D
i like how darik dad yell at him
Thanks everybody who read my story that means so much to me