I liked when you wrote APRIL FOOLS.
i liked the ending. i thought that you used awesome adjective.
Quavanti your story is OUTSTANDING!!! I love the way you added so many thrilling parts
that means alot lexi
I loved he yelled ''APRIL FOOL'S. ''
Your story was cool bro $
Your my best friend and you know that.Your storys are better than any I could make.YOU'RE AWESOME!!!!!!!
great job on the store and mist on the dialogue