great story but a little disgusting.this makes me not want a FUNNEL CAKE but if i had to i would
This wants to make me do it myself!!!
terrific story but kind of gross
It was really gross.I would pass out=D!
I liked your conclusion on every story.
Over coming your fear = i liked how you described everything and how you put lots of details
Awesomeness!!! My favorite part was when you made the free kick.
Awesome story! I cant believe you survived the cleat and the side tackle.;D[there's tackles in soccer?=0]
Liked your story ! I liked how you decribed what happened in the last story. :D :) XD
I love your story a lot!! You used a lot of dialogue, and it was all perfect and easy to understand.Great Job!!
I like to write and read
i love it it is cool.
I love the article
Thanks for sharing that was kinda sorta disgusting!