I liked the part were you wrote,''We saved the best for last, derek so we flew to his house and scared the freckles off of him''
I also loved that part it ruled. I LIKED YOUR WHOLE STORY!!!!!
I thought the same thing.
I liked your intro and your conclution.Your story was great.
I liked your story so much it made my scars fall off !
Hi! I liked the part when you said," We saved the best for last, Derek. So we went... Opps! I mean "floated" to his house and scared the freakles off of him!" That was my favorite part. Keep up the WONDERFUL work!
This story is awesome!! I love when Mahmoud and you scared the freckles off of Derek!!!!! That's what I call revenge!!!! WOOOP WOO!!!
I really love your ending.
p.s. I guess revenge is sweet. (:
I like your conclusion and I liked when you wrote ,'' kids in this days ask a lot of question'' your story was pretty funny.. IT IS AWESOME KEEP IT UP!!!!!!
I liked the part when you wrote,"We scared the freckles off of him."Awesome story.I also liked your illustration.(:
It was AMAZING!!!!!
l liked your intro and your story was terrific.
My famous quote," Who's Don?"