I love your story its so fun!
I loved how you put day one and day two. It really was awsome because it showed it starting that next day.
AWESOME conclusion! :) I love the twist of events when you meet Kristin.
Nice ending, I'm happy my name's not derik!
Grace your story is fantastic! I liked your conclusion.
I LOVED IT!! You have such a great imagination,well if this is made-up.Anyway I loved how Kristen played that AWESOME joke on Derek .Great job.(;
l love your story (: l love the part when you said ''i want my mommy''.
I liked when you wrote that you heard an evil crackling.
i love your story it was great.
I love your story.I liked your intro and conclution.