(Nadah) Katie your story grab the reader and hooked them.
(Casyn) Liked you're letter and story.
Awsome letter I really love the way you made me interested and surley can convence the president.
I like your intro.Wonderful story.
I liked when you directly wrote :- '' is this what you became president for?''
Awsome letter katie !!!!! l loved it
Love your letter and your story, Katie!
(Letter) I think that Obama will totally agree with you. You gave awesome reasons for Obama to either change the price of college or donate taxes for people who can't afford it. I also really agree with your concern. Very, very, very generous.
(First Shot) I loved this story! The part when your brother pinched you and you accidentally stabbed yourself with a stick! It was HILARIOUS! I also liked when the nurse and your mom talked for one minute, but it seemed like thirty minutes!!! Love your story, girl.
Once again, your letter and your story were awesome, girl! :)