I like the part when you bravely told him your name.
I love your story it is cool and awesome.
Amazing story Katherine. I LOVED the intro and conclusion.
I love the part when you wrote "If you want to live keep out!""Well we are not going to live anyway.Keep it up!
I love your story.It's awesome.
I like your conclusion. I also liked how you used dialouges.
wow l love it !!!!!!! (:
I liked your story especially when you put "At the point where,the voice so called Richarrd blurted out our house
Your story was one of the best story ever its better than all the storys on the blog!!!
Your story is GREAT! I loved that you were so brave to tell Mr.Richard Jenkins your name. I love that he became bright again from the red paint. I love your intro and conclusion.