I loved your story!!!I really liked your conclusion,you were not upset, you
were excited that you were with your family and friends.
This story is awesome! I loved the way you put emotion in your story.
I liked when you wrote that you were ugly.That made me laugh.Awesome story!!
I like your dog story. It kind of made me scared for you. I don't have a dog, but I know it would terrible to loose your best friend.
i really love your story it was awesome.
Love the dog story read it fast but I still read it all it was amazing
I'm crying so much right now... I can't stop crying. This story is so emotionally raw and exillerating, it really took my breath away. It reminded me of my best friend who was an egg and got made into an omelette... Moral of the story is we should l go vegan!!!!