I love all your detail !!!!
I love the way you how you entertained me with your spooky story congragulations.
Hey you! Nice story with Mr. Jenkins being the vampier and you and Andrew calling the police officers and mum and dad to tell them where you guys were to escape. You put a lot of details into your story! I wish I could write a story this long and this MAGNIFICENT!
thankyou miss. potter.. you are more and more awesome than me...
I like how you put a lot of detail in your story.AWESOME WORK you deserve a 4.
really? :) thankyou fadi
Thankyou , Iam glad that you liked it! :)
I love your details, and how you were trying to find the pass-code on the phone.
REALLY long but totally awesome!
Loved it when you wrote "and I never heared the word double dog dare again."
yeah actually i liked the conclusion too ...
lol thx... <3
I love your vampire story
Thx Sophia :)